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... sleep and never wake up again.
This is his prayer, his only friend.
Lost in delusions he still finds truth
but it's his heart he can never reboot.

         His nightmare isn't worth living for.
         No Longer.
         No More.

Blinded by his own stupidity
nevertheless reminded for infinity
that all he had was made to lose.
No matter what he finds, he can never choose.

         Strange whispers won't feed his core.
         No Longer.
         No More.

Crawled in the corner of his bed
he's haunted by the words he never said.
Locked his world inside the Scrolls of Time
remaining in the past, the darkness starts to shine.

         His empty vessel bleeds out on the floor
         No Longer.
         No More.


With a husky voice he cries out Her name
it's a past gone forever, unable to reclaim
Had she only known his love was worth her strife
would she have still taken her own life?

         To exist.
         No Longer.
      
         No More.
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I think the piece says it all. I'm not going to try and explain.

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~Mosestone Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you an actor ?? becouse you have all the qualities of belief in your writing? I feel your emotional content and I feel your .. ?
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~LikeDustIllRise Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, I'm no actress Mose. I'd never play pretend when I write. These are just pure emotions that live. I'm a huge empath, a very emotional person. Always extreme feelings, black or white..never gray.. and I guess it shows when I write. Is this what you mean?
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~Mosestone Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes .. I am very direct, sometimes in yah-face!
but that's me. I like your style, there is a little girl in you trying to make sense of what makes no sense?
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Mood: Peaceful ~LikeDustIllRise Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha I'm not sure about the little girl thing but I know what you mean yes... searching as every human being(or maybe not every, just the curiously smarter ones) ;) .. Thank you for the compliment Mose! :)
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Mood: Tearful ~SAPPHIRE-PELT Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this.Its beautiful.
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~LikeDustIllRise Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Strike 3!!

Good to know my instinct didn't let down! :)

Thanks for reading.
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This is so beautiful. I'm not usually emotional.. but i'm almost in tears.
Thank you for writing something so pretty. You are very talented :)
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~LikeDustIllRise Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just provide the words sweetie, it's strong people like you who make them come alive by reading with an open heart.
Thank you for taking the time to read it and for that great compliment.
I truly appreciate it! :)
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Its okay :)
I have actually read quite a few of your poems now. They all flow really nicely. So the complement really sticks :)
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~LikeDustIllRise Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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